Saturday, June 5, 2010

The Moon Is Blind Comments

Rating: 4.5
i thought she was the the light of the dark that guide me of this nature,
i thought z nature was z reflection of heaven, never expected z dark side zat mad me suffer,
i thought she was z one for me to be strong
zat i tasted the sweetness with my tongue

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kibrom habtu
COMMENTS
Jenny Gordon 22 January 2011
Fascinating and intriguing. A delightfully poetic look at love. I quite enjoyed how you portrayed it with the moon. Beautiful! Excellent! Yet since 'love' is reputed to be blind, how does it work that the moon is not yours when it is blind...or she loves you not because she is blind. Very interesting and enjoyable.
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Mohammed Albalushi 22 January 2011
and now i known that the moon is blind, very nice
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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 January 2011
I thought this was a lovely piece.
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 December 2010
sometimes what you thought is not what you thought it to be-funny but that is life
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Melanie Williams 29 November 2010
ah sweet deception. bittersweet at its best...
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