Bilal Raja

The Only Way To Cross The River Of Fire Is By Drowning

Your heart has fallen for a love
It’s going to have to forget
Come into the midst of love
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  • Dylan Oppedahl (7/12/2009 11:44:00 AM)

    Yea very true. You can smile but it will never heal

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  • Deona Skidmore (1/18/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    By FAR deserving of the ten I'm rating it...it fits my life perfectly.

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  • Dolan Doran (1/18/2009 9:15:00 PM)

    thank god, someone else understand the way it feels when you loose a love like that...it's a great poem. My favorite of yours so far.

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  • Jessica Goudreault (1/17/2009 10:46:00 PM)

    Those are some real feelings and I know a lot of people would be able to relate. I really like your rhyming, it's not just typical 'You, do, who' kinda stuff. It's more thought out, it's what I try to do and I like it.

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (1/17/2009 9:10:00 PM)

    Brave through the fire if you have to, she'll be impressed and regreted when your dead.Good writes Bilal.

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  • Emily Sleator *His Babey* (1/17/2009 6:40:00 PM)

    happiness can cover up alot of things but it cant cover up the things u feel.... when i cry my eyeliner shows how i feel

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (1/17/2009 6:24:00 PM)

    the las ttow lones gave you the score

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