The Ousting Of A Princess - (1) Poem by Judith Driscoll Bryan

The Ousting Of A Princess - (1)

Rating: 5.0


Pirate Parody - Part 1

Blue blooded and born of Nobility, am I
I'll sit on this Throne, till the day, I die.
King of this Monarchy..(Yes! That's me!)
I'm revered by all as 'His Majesty! '

Sitting aloof on my Royal Pedestal
I gaze at a daughter of masculine build.
Grossly mustached and gravely unskilled.
Her quest for a husband, may go unfulfilled!

(To be cont'd...)

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

DEANNA...MAGNIFICO! this is outstanding work with all the principals of FINE POETRY...GOOD STRUCTURE...DEXTEROUS USE OF IMAGERY...SMOOTH FLOWING LINEAGE..STEADY RHYTHM...AND TO BE CONTINUED, YIR KILLIN' ME DEANNA MY DEAR....KILLIN' ME...FRANK

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Judith Driscoll Bryan

Judith Driscoll Bryan

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada
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