Monday, June 18, 2007

The Passing Out Song Comments

Rating: 4.2
Sitting out here, I’m feeling so lonely
All my friends have gone a thousand miles away
Though the doors of life opened for us – together
Why does my step have to stagger at the very outset – today


Dipy Hermonite
Patricia Grantham 23 August 2013
Nothing lasts forever. Good things must come to an end. Remembering the days of being with comrades and running together must have been very rewarding. Thanks for the memories. Enjoyed your write. Please read my poem Salute to Soldiers.
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Lyn Paul 19 August 2013
A nice write for all the lads.this is one special memory you will always look back on.
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Very nice poem of your old memories.
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Divya Gupta 19 August 2013
nice 1..its natural that each and every person miss their old days a lot...this poem reminded some of my old memo.... :)
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Cameron Bird 08 August 2007
this is my favorite poem of yours, this is great
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Walt Martin 20 June 2007
I liked this because I could identify and relate; not everyone, as you know, has that commonality. It may be that there's room for expansion to the point of doubling content.
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