The Path Of My Life Comments

I read it alomost all time I visit your profile- Very Nice one, I like poems with such endings! !

a lovely write...connected nature to everthing....good

This poem is beautiful! I love the use of the nature, and how it relates to the ups and downs in life.

Expresses fully in touch feelings quite deeply and beautifully.

I had read this earlier. I loved it.. its amazing how people, like yourself can speak so poetically.. Me on the other hand, has a hard time doing so.. I write how i feel.. Here in the United States its hard to find people who can speak or write poems in an Old English way... Congrats on the poem.. Olivia Jones

the context is consequential to awareness of self...well implied write...

the waterfall pours into stillness and the stillness is unmoved...............beautiful observations...John

I feel this poem is the equivalent to a parallel of my life. The poetry flows as life does, meeting rapids, tides, and water, smooth as a millpond.. Very well written, so deep and honest.

Well expressed the feel. Good.

Another Brilliant poem! I love the emotion of it and the way it makes me think. Once again I'm jealous. (smile) You write with such depth. Very good work.

I think your poem is great. I'm sorry I'm not qualified to give advice.

i luv it overall ur peoms was all amazing not to wrry keep it up 10+