Thursday, January 1, 2004

The Pathfinders Comments

Rating: 3.1

NIGHT, and a bitter sky, and strange birds crying,
The wan trees whisper and the winds make moan,
Here where in ultimate peace their bones are lying
In gaunt waste places that they made their own,


Michelle Claus 06 June 2014

And so it goes throughout our human story... *No proud stone speaks*... countless unsung heroes

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Kevin Patrick 06 June 2014

Slow sinks the glowing flame and fades the ember, No bright star flickers and the woods are stark, But still our children's children will remember The swift forerunners, bearers of the ark, Who lit the beacons in the uncharted dark. Tremendous amount of beauty and depth, the language is rich and flow with natural rhythm, a really great modern poem of the day

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Savita Tyagi 06 June 2014

Beautiful poem. Brings out so many emotions.

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Manonton Dalan 06 June 2012

he could be one of the pathfinders.

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