' ' ' The Present Moment! (For Lyn) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' The Present Moment! (For Lyn)

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She offers me
the gift

inexpertly & awkwardly
wrapped.

Christmas paper in July.

Water drips from
its centre.

I open it up
& am greeted by

a stone
a bunch of grass
(with roots still attached)
& two(& a half) twigs
a half crazy bug who
just happened to be
caught up in it.

'It's a present
of here! '

I thanked her
& she trundled off

telling her dolly
called 'Dolly'

'See...I know him!

'Told you he'd like it! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 22 January 2009

Love the two way title...a 'present' and a 'present moment! ! ' How perfectly you 'see' into her childhood, and tell all those moments that she PRESENTED to you...and thus, to me. Thank you, dear Donall, dear Friend, father of an angel! !

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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