s.zaynab kamoonpuri

Port Hart corte (place of birth)
s.zaynab kamoonpuri
Port Hart corte (place of birth)
Monday, October 1, 2012

The Royal, The Regal Versus The Poet's Realm Comments

Rating: 4.6
Of splendid thrones of gold
Of treasures manifold

Of jewelled caskets

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s.zaynab kamoonpuri
COMMENTS
Colin Bradley 20 March 2013
Outstanding well done
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Bri Edwards 07 December 2012
i enjoyed this quite a bit as i had my slave girl read it to me, the master, seated on my platinum throne. bravo.
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Shahzia Batool 30 October 2012
The poem as well as all the comments on it are all interesting...you write with a proper outlining...good Zaynub....
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isam Abdelrahman 24 October 2012
fine.novel and well written
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Hans Vr 15 October 2012
So true what are all the material treasures in the world versus the soul treasures of the poet. Unless of course the king is a poet himself.
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Saadat Tahir 14 October 2012
interesting and fun too....liked reading it..... and i loved the way you thumbed yer poetic nose at pomp and glory great...
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Hazel Durham 14 October 2012
Great imagery with a lovely flow, you write beautifully!
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Zarina Binda 10 October 2012
i like the rythm in this one and as always you have a talent with words and you're not afraid to show it! ! xXx Zarina
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Dave Walker 10 October 2012
A really fantastic poem, really like it.
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Hamid Negah 05 October 2012
nice written and in a very meaningful sense.
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Karen Sinclair 02 October 2012
i really enjoyed this, it felt like the ride at a fairground where you raise and fall without actually walking anywhere...and yes i make you right, what a difficult time the sovereigns have placed in a position with such high expectations, always appears lovely on first inspection but oh my god how boring and so so restrictive....so much better to be the one to entertain and hopefully as you say sway thoughts occasionally....
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Long description of wayward riches and pomp decimated by loving voice ans songs. True. It's always that way. Keep it up.
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