Monday, July 10, 2006

The Sea Comments

Rating: 4.7

When twilight charms the city breeze
The sea hums near but far beneath.
A film of milk stretches past sight
Glazes the moon, open and bright.


Masiela Lusha
William Jackson 11 July 2006

Lovely images and ryhme scheme. I love the sea. Beautiful poem.

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