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The Song Was So Enchanting - Poem by alan brown

The song it lingered in my mind
a song I'd heard before.
It taunted me and beguiled me
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Topic(s) of this poem: war memories

Form: Free Verse


Comments about The Song Was So Enchanting by alan brown

  • Hazel Durham (5/12/2018 1:38:00 PM)

    So original and brilliant write Alan with a beautiful flow and rhythm! (Report)Reply

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  • Naila Rais (5/10/2018 9:50:00 AM)

    A great write.. I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too..
    Naila
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  • (5/10/2018 7:17:00 AM)

    Very touching poem Alan (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/6/2018 9:12:00 AM)

    Fantastic expression on war memories. I love most lines are.......
    Just then a bolt of lighting
    struck a tree outside my door.
    And the words that had taunted me
    were spread out on the floor.
    ..... ..... ..... ..... .....
    The song was so enchanting
    that I took it to my heart
    Because I never ever wanted
    my memory's.....
    Marvelous poem.10
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  • Rajnish Manga (5/6/2018 7:50:00 AM)

    Very touching and impressive- song. Thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (5/6/2018 7:38:00 AM)

    A lovely poignant poem full of great memories.
    Beautifully crafted write.10
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