Lyf Burns

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The Story Of A Coward - Poem by Lyf Burns

Shots fired
Into the sky.
Bullets returning
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Comments about The Story Of A Coward by Lyf Burns

  • (6/15/2011 10:24:00 PM)

    OMG you kept me in the palm of your hand till the end of the poem, brilliant. A dramatic story, yet i want another one! ! ! make another one! ! ! ! I am a fan! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/11/2011 10:53:00 PM)

    Fantastic poem. Full of depth and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery.
    Great write indeed.
    I give it 10/10.
    Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
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  • Ace Of Black Hearts (6/11/2011 9:37:00 PM)

    Courage comes from the desperate. We are all truly cowards until we have to take action. Sometimes its more important one lives then they die. A death in vain is a wasted life indeed. I like this poem, keep up the excellent writing. (Report)Reply

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