Wednesday, April 8, 2009

The Treasure Box Comments

Rating: 5.0
I have a treasure, dear friend of mine.
I have cherished it long, you know.
Really, it’s a part of me;
I am ready to share it though.

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Paige Scott
COMMENTS
Sonya Florentino 28 July 2009
oh what a precious precious thing... hope the one you give it to will cherish it like the treasure it is..... beautiful!
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Paul Hansford 28 July 2009
Very nicely written, and it shows real emotion. The unspecified (but all the more interesting for that) treasure is clearly more valuable than it appears. If it is your heart, or your love, it is certainly worth a lot, and the one you give it to should treasure it.
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Very deep message, and intense emotion. Paige always write for the sheer joy of expression and sharing. I loved all your poems. Cheryl
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Mark R Slaughter 15 April 2009
Nice flowing and rhyming work Paige. Keep up the writing - you have great potential. Regards Mark
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Mark R Slaughter 15 April 2009
Nice flowing and rhyming work Paige. Keep up the writing. Regards Mark
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Susan Bagley 14 April 2009
Nice Paige, good subject. Reminds me of my Secret Love poem. I like your style and you may change over your lifetime but your writing style will probably remain the same but you will just polish and enhance it over the years. My compliments to you at this stage in your writing. Susan
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Adam Sobh 13 April 2009
i love the rhyming, very creative and imaginative!
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David Harris 08 April 2009
Paige, what a beautiful poem. I loved the rhyme in this that worked very well. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs David
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