Wednesday, January 7, 2009

The Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0
look at the tree as it bends in the breeze
listen to its wispering leaves
a story to tell if you listen well


john mc cudden
Jim Norausky 21 January 2009
John, Very nice poem to go through. Enjoyed it.10 here
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Carolyn Brunelle 15 January 2009
Really nice imagery! !
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Janri Gogeshvili 13 January 2009
Perfectly … the figurative... «whispering grass O so weak» Drysidae more deeply realised mysteries … /10
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Nikia Chesney 12 January 2009
This is a great piece. I love the line i bend and i flow with the wind as i go i never say yes i never say no i bend and i flow with the wind as i grow If only we could be like that. Easy going in everything, no worries, just go with the flow. I aslo love the end, to give you the answers the secrets would be told and the answers i would no longer hold so ask the grass for the answers you seek whispering grass O so weak A smart-alic remark. lol! It's a great answer. Why would you tell all your secrets when after it's done, you wont be the only one that knows anymore!
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