john mc cudden

The Tree

look at the tree as it bends in the breeze
listen to its wispering leaves
a story to tell if you listen well
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  • Jim Norausky (1/21/2009 1:38:00 PM)

    John, Very nice poem to go through. Enjoyed it.10 here

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  • Carolyn BrunelleCarolyn Brunelle (1/15/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    Really nice imagery! !

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  • Janri Gogeshvili (1/13/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    Perfectly … the figurative...
    «whispering grass O so weak»
    Drysidae more deeply realised mysteries …
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  • Nikia Chesney (1/12/2009 11:54:00 PM)

    This is a great piece. I love the line

    i bend and i flow with the wind as i go
    i never say yes i never say no
    i bend and i flow with the wind as i grow

    If only we could be like that. Easy going in everything, no worries, just go with the flow.

    I aslo love the end, to give you the answers the secrets would be told
    and the answers i would no longer hold
    so ask the grass for the answers you seek
    whispering grass O so weak

    A smart-alic remark. lol! It's a great answer. Why would you tell all your secrets when after it's done, you wont be the only one that knows anymore!

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