The Waiting Cloud Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran
The Waiting Cloud
Not a cloud burst.
Yet emotions get
build up_
let them rain out
From here
I am able to see
the stream down
flowing lean and
meandering
few birds leaving-
they look satiated-
Let us talk
face to face
across this table
flexible
But you must know
I need a face-
not a shadow
to talk with
This bottle of wine
compromise is
waiting to get
opened
January 25,2023
Communication is the essence of any relationship. Very nice poem
Letting the heart show so together you may walk hand in hand! .. Quite powerfully and beautifully expressed! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
nicely depicted the imagery by the poetic words; I enjoyed
Beautiful vivid imagery. Great metaphor. You've brilliantly communicated to us the need for effective communication in relationships. Although the poem is sad, I did enjoy it, Kesav. Great work!
Very captivating piece of writing. Bravo! It has great depth.
A sad moment between two persons. Certainly an open talk will help solve any problem.The poetic expression is great
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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1/28/2023 7:01:57 PM # 1.0.0.1094
Yeah. Talk can solve many a problem. Very nice poem indeed. Thanks.