The Waiting Cloud Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

The Waiting Cloud

Rating: 5.0


Not a cloud burst.

Yet emotions get
build up_
let them rain out

From here
I am able to see
the stream down
flowing lean and
meandering
few birds leaving-
they look satiated-

Let us talk
face to face
across this table
flexible

But you must know
I need a face-
not a shadow
to talk with

This bottle of wine
compromise is
waiting to get
opened

January 25,2023

The Waiting Cloud
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 25 January 2023

Yeah. Talk can solve many a problem. Very nice poem indeed. Thanks.

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 January 2023

Communication is the essence of any relationship. Very nice poem

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Rebecca Navarre 25 January 2023

Letting the heart show so together you may walk hand in hand! .. Quite powerfully and beautifully expressed! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 January 2023

Beautiful Kesav

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 26 January 2023

nicely depicted the imagery by the poetic words; I enjoyed

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Maria Mitea 28 January 2023

This poem is like a net! Wonderfull work, Kesav!

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Richard Wlodarski 28 January 2023

Beautiful vivid imagery. Great metaphor. You've brilliantly communicated to us the need for effective communication in relationships. Although the poem is sad, I did enjoy it, Kesav. Great work!

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2023

Very captivating piece of writing. Bravo! It has great depth.

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Anjandev Roy 27 January 2023

Lovely write throughout........thanks for sharing.....

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Indira Renganathan 26 January 2023

A sad moment between two persons. Certainly an open talk will help solve any problem.The poetic expression is great

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