The Waiting Cloud Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

The Waiting Cloud

Rating: 5.0

Not a cloud burst.

Yet emotions get
build up_
let them rain out

From here
I am able to see
the stream down
flowing lean and
few birds leaving-
they look satiated-

Let us talk
face to face
across this table

But you must know
I need a face-
not a shadow
to talk with

This bottle of wine
compromise is
waiting to get

January 25,2023

The Waiting Cloud
Anil Kumar Panda 25 January 2023

Yeah. Talk can solve many a problem. Very nice poem indeed. Thanks.

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 January 2023

Communication is the essence of any relationship. Very nice poem

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Rebecca Navarre 25 January 2023

Letting the heart show so together you may walk hand in hand! .. Quite powerfully and beautifully expressed! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 January 2023

Beautiful Kesav

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 26 January 2023

nicely depicted the imagery by the poetic words; I enjoyed

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Maria Mitea 28 January 2023

This poem is like a net! Wonderfull work, Kesav!

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Richard Wlodarski 28 January 2023

Beautiful vivid imagery. Great metaphor. You've brilliantly communicated to us the need for effective communication in relationships. Although the poem is sad, I did enjoy it, Kesav. Great work!

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2023

Very captivating piece of writing. Bravo! It has great depth.

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Anjandev Roy 27 January 2023

Lovely write throughout........thanks for sharing.....

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Indira Renganathan 26 January 2023

A sad moment between two persons. Certainly an open talk will help solve any problem.The poetic expression is great

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