Thursday, January 30, 2014

The War Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ashoka the great* did not find joy
The war had ended with peace to enjoy
The boundaries were annexed and secured
The enemy was fully annihilated and routed

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COMMENTS
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 January 2014

Great Sir! I think we need to reach out to many people, youngsters especially, with poems such as this..they will understand the simple rendition with power-packed thoughts. There is a typo I think...made chase should be mad chase... Warm regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Jan 31,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 January 2014

Wow Rimjhim TyagiLess than a minute ago This is actually a very different poem. Few people write about Indian history; glad to see you're one of the few! Amazing poetry.... Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 January 2014

LOVE IT...... giNNi. (mYsTeRiOus) 3 minutes ago intresTinG..........

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 January 2014

Mitos Jane Nepomuceno likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 January 2014

Ashoka the great* did not find joy The war had ended with peace to enjoy

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