Monday, May 21, 2012

The Watchman Comments

Rating: 0.0

Andrew does not see time
He sees gears and levers
In the tock, tock chime
As numbers align and trigger
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Abigail Pastor
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 15 November 2012

Very very good, enjoyed this brief narrative on an intriguing character and you managed to weave the story in excellent poetic lines and delightful style. Whoever rated this 5 does not know poetry. 10++++++++++

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Abigail Pastor

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West Chester, PA
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