Wednesday, June 3, 2009

The Wedding Comments

Rating: 4.7

i wake up early dawn
to witness the changes in sky
from darkness to morn
for a new bride tonight..

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COMMENTS
Adeeb Alfateh 09 June 2019

for all those days of confusions my hours filled with loneliness all i see is his perfect love a true love which is always the best... great write 10+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Camagu Somana 26 September 2018

lady grace i love your poem...

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 17 November 2017

so nice one i read it keep it up and do some good poems on love and lust

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Hirak Mishra 21 October 2017

Fantastic

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Tapan M. Saren 15 April 2017

Beautiful very beautiful poem.....

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Eyan Desir 24 April 2010

Well happy annivery indeed... good write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2009

wake up early dawn to witness the changes in sky from darkness to morning light for a new bride tonight..yes and reminds of olden days and sweet memeories to be cherished.... lovely poems with clear hear and feelings....10

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James James 27 June 2009

not only the hearts screwed up

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Salu Salu 21 June 2009

you simply make magic in writing.....so vividly narrates..and you had all the hearts screwed up................ salu.

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Sadiqullah Khan 16 June 2009

You are already a star, grace, what if we comment or not, still the joy of reading this piece was immense.10

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Raghavan Warrier 16 June 2009

A beautiful poem. I wonder how many thousands of poems are already written on the subject of love. But this haunting piece (with a touch of feeling similar to 'Wuthering Heights') with contrasting imagery and an unexpected ending convinces me that beautiful poems can still be written by a highly creative mind.

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A great poem where in the human emotions are expressed with out any inhibitions. Kudos.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 15 June 2009

I celebrate my fiftieth wedding anniversay on th 20th of this month.Sometimes marriage is very hard.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 15 June 2009

The end of the story surprise me in sadness, it's like a real piece which i saw with my own eyes, tks for sharing

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Vibhu Ashok 14 June 2009

You Know I never write a poem keeping in my mind the rules of litrature, Like you I always write what my heart says, its really gud meet a person who writes in same way.Very touching poem, flow of time is like that only, we cant realise how much time is being spent How much we love a person, until and unless time of departure comes.

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Vibhu Ashok 14 June 2009

You Know I never write a poem keeping in my mind the rules of litrature, Like you I always write what my heart says, its really gud meet a person who writes in same way.Very touching poem, flow of time is like that only, we cant realise how much time is being spent How much we love a person, until and unless time of departure comes.

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~Crystal Midnight~ 13 June 2009

oh my gosh... wow... if this is real I am sooo sorry its beyound words can tell you. this left me speachless. ~MC~

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Irene Umulisa 10 June 2009

This is a good poem. However whereas i did understand the message behind the poem, the flow of the poem was a little confusing. Think there were also a few issues with regard to diction.

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the pain is still here with too much sadness and anger today may be the end tomorrow is never a fine.. ... the painful departure always upsets us and particularly on silver wedding anniversaaaary........10

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Keegan Coutriers 09 June 2009

Shame, hope it's not based on personal experience? If it is, my condolences. Love the contrasting flow of the poem and the end of it was just shocking (a good shock) . Grammatical structuring & use of words are very important. The idea behind the poem was wonderful. Good read.

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