Monday, September 1, 2008

The Wonder Of The Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0
I’m the youngest in my family
And when I was a girl
My father, mother, and sister
Loomed as greater creatures in my eye.

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Kay Vitter
COMMENTS
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 December 2013
An amazing muse philosophical on stars. I hav unpostd poems on stars in which i too said sth like 'they keep each other company' in a difrent way, so i enjoyd dis awesome poem. Pls review my latest poem too.
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Wandering Scarlet 19 September 2008
there are some really deep thoughts going on here, more than meets the eye i think... this is really excellent writing. -ROCCO
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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 September 2008
Thrilling....great stuff..you are a great poet....my 10
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Dee Daffodil 10 September 2008
It's funny how things that we here as kids can have a lastin effect on us. I still avoid cracks in the sidewalk! ! I thought it was just me being silly...until I caught my little guy (5 yrs) hopping one day as we walked...and muttering to himself...'don't step on a crack...or you'll break your mother's back...' So...I guess I'm greatful that not everything we here as kids is true.: -) Very creative poem! Hugs, Dee
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ne plus ultra “ blades and suicides of [grass]” what a 180 degree turn; you actually made a play dough of language and kneaded it at will
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