Clara Odelia Ciutara

There You Were - Poem by Clara Odelia Ciutara

Not knowing what sight I would get
Not knowing what path I should walk
Not knowing what life I was living
Not knowing what love had been waiting
I knew nothing but my confusions

And there you were
Bringing a new sight of happiness
Showing where I should go
Making life become wonderful
And giving me such a beautiful life

There you were
In the edge of the beach
With the place I was
Once in a sandy dreams
And there we were

You took me from my dream
You loved me for who I was
You brought me to where I am
To where you are
To where our forever love lies

Comments about There You Were by Clara Odelia Ciutara

  • (7/13/2011 7:12:00 AM)

    Hi Clara,

    Well written and very visual....I could read and visualize everything and to me thats the real power of poetry, you don't have to write paragraphs or long stories for the reader to see what the poet is syaing but few lines and in your poem the lines are so beautiful....loved it
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (4/21/2010 9:08:00 AM)

    nice penning here... very good! (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (2/6/2010 6:13:00 PM)

    Hello Clara - This is a beautiful Free Verse Poem. It has excellent structure - flow and content. I love the story it tells - we all want to be 'The Person who is there - and is just right - for someone who is seeking'. V 1 A Vision - A Path - Life - Love these all represent choices in our lives. V 2 Sometimes the right person comes along - at the right time - and makes a big difference in our life. When we begin to share our hopes with them we receive insight and direction. V 3 Sometimes we meet in 'real time' other times in 'dream time' both are equally important. V 4 We can be taken from our dreams to be where we both are. When we find the right person - Clara - we can find eternal love - AWESOME. Thanks for sharing. Love you in Poetry - JOHN (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 10:22:00 PM)

    Clara you have grown in your poetry. This poem is showing your maturity. It has all aspects of good, well written poem. Very interesting. It clearly tels a story, has abeginning, middle and ending...........10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 14, 2011

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