Kim Barney

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Thinking About The Gym (Limerick) - Poem by Kim Barney

I watch guys coming out of the gym,
and they all look so healthy and trim.
I might go there. I should!
It would make them feel good.
"Oh, thank goodness we're nothing like him! "

Topic(s) of this poem: health, humor

Form: Limerick

Poet's Notes about The Poem

31 Jul 2019

Comments about Thinking About The Gym (Limerick) by Kim Barney

  • Anjandev Roy (8/26/2019 9:15:00 AM)

    so healthy and trim.....well written. Thank u.anjandev roy. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (8/15/2019 11:32:00 AM)

    Definitely if you will go to gym all will be happy because you will be slim and acquire good health. This gym Limerick is definitely very interesting and unlimited fun giving...10 (Report)Reply

    Kim BarneyKim Barney(8/15/2019 5:05:00 PM)

    Thank you, old buddy Kumarmani.

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  • S.zaynab KamoonpuriS.zaynab Kamoonpuri (8/5/2019 11:24:00 AM)

    Hah what a sweet cool Limerick, you wrote it super in self banter hmm thats what counts not the weighing scale. Kudos! !

    Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

    Kim BarneyKim Barney(8/9/2019 11:29:00 PM)

    Thank you for the comment, Zaynab.

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  • Darwin Henry BeuningDarwin Henry Beuning (8/1/2019 7:28:00 AM)

    Kim, Very funny, Great picture! ! ! (Report)Reply

    Kim BarneyKim Barney(8/2/2019 11:48:00 AM)

    Thanks, Hank.

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  • Douglas Scotney (7/31/2019 9:34:00 PM)

    a fellow in a group being photographed kept looking down. He was asked to look up. He did. In the photo you could see right up his nostrils. (Report)Reply

    Kim BarneyKim Barney(8/2/2019 11:49:00 AM)

    Thanks for reading and commenting, Doug.

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  • Wes VoglerWes Vogler (7/31/2019 8:51:00 PM)

    why just today I stood up straight and strolled for half an hour. Kind of nice not to look over the top of my glasses
    nice Lim Kim (when you get to be Chinese we have a name for you)

    Kim BarneyKim Barney(8/2/2019 11:47:00 AM)

    Strolled for half an hour? I don't think I could even do that. bad hips and knees and one ankle.
    Thanks for commenting, Wes.
    Lim Kim? Is that the name you have for me?
    I know a Korean guy whose surname is Kim.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 31, 2019

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