bethany seed

Rookie (19 may / england)

This Dark World - Poem by bethany seed

The sky is
so dark
i hate this
world
i wont leave this world
only because
that means i will
never see you
feel you
hear your voice
your the
only resson
im still in this world
when i get a lonly
i wont to die
no one will care if
i jump off the cliff
right now
but
when im in my time of darkness
you come
and light the way
even when i feel like i should die
you stop me
and
i love you for that
i know in this world made of
hate
anger
killing
there are at lest one person
who cares for me
i dont listern to
what people say to me
because i know
what they are saying
they all hate me
i dont care
i know you will
be
there
when i lost hope in this world
you all ways prove me wrong
that this world is a dark place
but i know now
it
isnt


Comments about This Dark World by bethany seed

  • (12/8/2008 5:08:00 PM)


    wow another marvellous write with very strong, rising and falling words....bravo, thanks 10+++
    rgds
    asif
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  • (8/24/2008 8:54:00 AM)


    i love the poem although u have some spelling mistakes that don`t affect the beauty of this poem much...leav...resson...haer...leave...reason...hear.
    i loved the poem anyway.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 28, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 31, 2008


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