Monday, March 24, 2008

This Mask Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wear a mask from now on.
To hide my true feelings.
As I lie on this bed.
And stare at this ceiling.

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Michael Smith
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very well done. i can actually relate to this poem as im going through stuff and this poem descibes it! if i had to describe it in one word it would be wow.

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Pandora Chaos 31 March 2008

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! idk wat 2 say that was amazing i like this poem alot. i give it a 10/10 ~TORN IN TWO BY THE 1 I LOVE~ A-K-A Victoria Emo Girl

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