Ravi Kopra

Three Kisses

That scented oil perfume
rubbed on me when I held you close to me
this morning in the garden and gave you
three long kisses of love.

You were standing still with your eyes closed
when I cupped your beautiful face
suddenly your face turned red
you whole body shook and you said:

Soft waves of warmth are overtaking me
never have I ever felt like this before
I feel my life is beginning...

The fragrance of those scents is still with me
I am not washing myself, nor taking a shower
I want to sleep with your scents tonight
to have you all night in my dreams.

Topic(s) of this poem: kiss, love, scent

Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 7, 2017
Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 21, 2017

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Comments about Three Kisses by Ravi Kopra

  • Terry Dawson (1/23/2020 1:15:00 AM)

    Haha, four things greater than all things are, love and love, and and luck

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  • Paula Dennison (8/22/2018 3:56:00 PM)

    I like this poem very much. It reminded of a time in my own life experience. It had an affect on my senses and gave me rich images of the garden and the couple. A sensuous and romantic writing. I read it over and over because I liked the way the words fell and balanced.

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  • Govind singh (3/9/2018 5:59:00 AM)

    Amazing poem by an extremely talented poet....keep writing pls.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (12/31/2017 6:09:00 AM)

    Soft waves of warmth are overtaking me
    never have I ever felt like this before
    I feel my life is beginning..... to have you all night in my dreams....... the scent. the kiss, the love, softness, thank you dear poet for this great poem. tony

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    Ravi Kopra(12/31/2017 8:47:00 AM)

    Thank you Tony for the visit and your lovable comment. I believe I have already made a comment on one of your favorite poems in which the spouse is fearful that he might die before she does! I will check it again. Merry Christmas and happy holidays. You must still be busy in your ministry spreading the holy words of a holy son of a holy holy God! God will welcome you when he calls you.

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/26/2017 8:31:00 PM)

    The fragrance of feelings are still with the poet
    He is not feeling anything else, he has stopped the fleeting of his mind
    He has confined himself to a bed room, waiting for the moonlit night
    to have his sweetheart all night in his dreams.....................................Ravi Kopra, I love your poems.

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    Ravi Kopra(11/26/2017 8:48:00 PM)

    Akhtar bhai sahib, thanks for your kind comment and for showing your liking for my poems. Your poetry is remarkable too. I translated and posted another of your poems. However, I could not find your Ghazal AAp Ayay at your poetry page after I posted its translation. I wanted to attach a link of your poem to my posting as suggested by mahashya Manga sahib. Did you delete your ghazal?

    Khush Amdid.

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  • Ravi Kopra (10/22/2017 10:49:00 AM)

    You are always welcome.

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  • Luo ZhihaiLuo Zhihai (10/22/2017 8:49:00 AM)

    You said I have posted those poems at this site, Thank you very much!

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  • Luo ZhihaiLuo Zhihai (10/20/2017 5:49:00 PM)

    Wonderful feelings... Great heart poem. You are a true talent.

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    Ravi Kopra(10/20/2017 7:42:00 PM)

    Thank you, Luo. I like your Chinese poetry so much that I have attempted to render many of your poems in simple English. I have posted those poems at this site, giving you full credit - always mentioning your name. Please contact me if I misinterpreted some of them. I will edit and post again. Happy poetry writing! .

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  • Dawn NovusDawn Novus (10/17/2017 5:22:00 AM)

    Pure poetic picture of love

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    Ravi Kopra(10/17/2017 5:54:00 AM)

    Thanks for stopping by and for your appreciation of my poem.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/7/2017 11:27:00 PM)

    Soft waves of warmth are overtaking with the fragrance of three wonderful kisses. You are wise in expression. Amazing poem this is...10

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    Ravi Kopra(10/17/2017 5:52:00 AM)

    Mahakul Sahib, thanks for your comment.

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