Three Pups And A Dog Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

Three Pups And A Dog

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I was a rabid dog
trying to get three pups
to play nice with the stick
they found along the way
during their stroll home
I might not have used the right words
well actually I used some vulgar words
which caused these pups to go home
and talk to their parents
Their parents are quite angry
and are out for some kind of revenge
that I cannot sniff out
I was acting out of anger
for I do not like pups being
bullied by other pups
and when I see this I get angry
I shouldn't've been so harsh
especially when I didn't know every detail
I remember when I was young
and how the older kids
used to pick on us younger kids
It just brought me back
so I went straight to attack
I apologize for doing this

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 11 November 2005

Hey you tried to take up for someone that's all that counts...nice write :)

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Mary Nagy 11 November 2005

I think it's nice that you would stick up for the ones getting picked on..........I guess it's a shame if you were wrong about the situation, but your heart was in the right place! Sincerely, Mary

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