Akshat Shukla

Gold Star - 5,714 Points (20/12/1991)

Thy Love - Poem by Akshat Shukla

She turned the clock back eight years,
To a time when Love trickled tears;
When breezy romance rained recklessly,
When riddling remorse rhymed with riddance.
She spelled a ticklish trance of nostalgia
That always splattered cynical sensations
On the coarse canvas of my laden life.
Yesterday, I rode a mysterious wave of mania
With her memories into an infinity of darkness.
Love, thy name is eternity! Eternity of Love!

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Thy Love by Akshat Shukla

  • Chinedu Dike (2/12/2017 10:29:00 AM)


    Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Thanks for sharing Akshat. (Report) Reply

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  • Souren Mondal (2/2/2016 8:44:00 PM)


    [...]She spelled a ticklish trance of nostalgia

    That always splattered cynical sensations

    On the coarse canvas of my laden life.[...]

    Now you are talking! ! Brilliant lines and a wonderful finalne... A poem that touches a universal chord buddy. Wonderful :)
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  • Nosheen Irfan (1/26/2016 12:24:00 AM)


    Romance rained recklessly, riddling remorse rhymed with riddance...splendid imagery once again. You are a poet at heart Shukla. I can easily say that.10 (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (1/24/2016 7:44:00 AM)


    A love that found deep roots in the heart, even if got stifled will re emerge occasionally plunging one to a kind maniac nostalgia! I can see the frustration one feels, when haunted by memories of a lost love. Yes... love is eternal, but it can hurt, hurt badly! Poignant write! (Report) Reply

  • Ernest Makuakua (1/23/2016 3:52:00 AM)


    Yesterday, I rode a mysterious wave of mania
    With her memories into an infinity of darkness.
    Love, thy name is eternity! Eternity of Love!

    great piece my friend
    thanks for sharing
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  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/21/2016 12:04:00 PM)


    Love, thy name is eternity! Eternity of Love! ..... Beautifully expressed. nothing less then 10.

    Love! always there
    Deeply tucked
    inside your heart
    In joys and pain
    In loss and gain
    (Report) Reply

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/21/2016 10:21:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem really....full with love nd simplicity...thank u for sharing :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 21, 2016

Poem Edited: Friday, January 22, 2016


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