Louise Bizzari


Time - Poem by Louise Bizzari

My song of time a soundless hymn
Like weeping rain against the wind
I'll sail along a sea of space
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Comments about Time by Louise Bizzari

  • (3/7/2005 11:36:00 AM)

    A true 10 for one of my favorite poetry writer's poems. Take a bow, for I am applauding you for your great writing.
    I was nine years old when I first started writing poetry. Who, or what was your inspiration for writing such great poems? Edgar A. Poe, inspired me into the types of poetry I write.
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  • (1/29/2005 10:30:00 PM)

    Beautifully written Ms.Bizzari!
    I don't know if it was your first poem, but that was pretty good for a 13 years old girl.
    I wrote my first poem at thirteen too. :)
    I really enjoyed reading your poem.

    ~JD~
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  • (1/1/2005 6:25:00 PM)

    Thanks for the 'tho' / 'though'....It was 32 years ago, my classical engine must have stalled at that tender age Miss Zylstra! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/1/2005 12:55:00 PM)

    Good rhythm, good imagery. Try not to abbreviate your words. 'Tho' spoils the classical look of the line. 'Though' would be better. (Report)Reply

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