Time Flys Poem by shane kelsey

Time Flys

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Time flys by
I know longer cry
because you are a
Memory in the wind
not even a friend

But as I sit here
grin because I
look in my future
Ifeel happy again
because

I know yet what
it holds or what will
Begin I know I feel
better sitting with my
Mates seldomly making me grin
well this is the end

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Shane Kelsey 02 March 2012

ok one of my first poems please be critcal so i can learn more lol

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