Time To Breathe Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Time To Breathe

Rating: 5.0


You say
you do not have any time
to breathe

Your complaint
comes to mind

Let me go shopping
to buy some time for you-
in tonnage

Are you prepared
to breathe
provided I manage to bring
time for you?

February 2, 2023

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2023

A thoughtful poem. To be considerate with other's feelings is a wonderful attribute. Well crafted and expressed.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 05 February 2023

So, come and breathe the poem of humaity

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Indira Renganathan 04 February 2023

Great fun....enojyable thoroughly....thanks a lot

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D.N. Rebb 03 February 2023

What a great final line. Yes, please, bring me some time.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 03 February 2023

Yes, Rebb. The preparedness for anything, without which no time would suffice. Nice feedback

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Nosheen Irfan 03 February 2023

Life is so fast. We must pause and breathe in the fresh air. A great question to ask. Very relevant!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 February 2023

We all need time to breathe because it goes too fast Bravo! ! !

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