Mubeen Sadhika

Tiny Rhyme - Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Fish oh! fish
swish a miss
wish on hiss
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Comments about Tiny Rhyme by Mubeen Sadhika

  • Chinedu Dike (1/16/2017 7:35:00 PM)

    Beautiful and sonorous train of thought, well articulated and nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Mubeen Sadhika (11/11/2016 1:10:00 AM)

    Thank you all for giving your valuable comments. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (11/10/2016 10:16:00 PM)

    A very innovative poem.++10

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    Mubeen Sadhika (11/11/2016 1:09:00 AM)

    Thank you so much sir

  • (4/8/2011 4:18:00 PM)

    I love it! It's so nonsensical...kind of like Dr. Seuss. I love Dr. Seuss.: D (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2010 4:09:00 AM)

    Excellently penned. Good Luck ahead!

    Yaseen Anwer
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  • (10/28/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    Excellent rhymes. You’ve done it.
    Rhymes are scaring please write more and more.
    Ms. Nivedita

    Cordially invite to read and comment on
    Enigmatic Navel or other poems
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  • (10/19/2009 4:01:00 PM)

    this poem was a little funny
    good write
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  • (10/9/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    Very impressive tiny lil work...I really enjoyed it a lot.10 is for sure from me...... (Report) Reply

  • Anthony Edmond John (10/2/2009 7:00:00 AM)

    Nice and illustrative Rhymes.. Nice work man. (Report) Reply

  • Opeyemi Borisade (9/29/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    I read with my mind & it's now really twisted. Graet rhyming...good work! Cheers
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  • (9/29/2009 3:15:00 AM)

    a real gud poem....specially the rhyme wala part.... (Report) Reply

  • (9/29/2009 12:48:00 AM)

    This piece contains strong rhymes, nice to read especially to kids. Besides the lines are melodious, there are simple musical notes in it. Well done...cheers 10+ (Report) Reply

  • (9/28/2009 5:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful, melodious and refreshing.10. (Report) Reply

  • (9/28/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    Hey nice rhyme! ! ! ! ! ! This is fun to read..
    I guess you had great fun writing this poem too.. entertaining

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  • (9/28/2009 11:44:00 AM)

    really nice rhyme (Report) Reply

  • (9/28/2009 10:45:00 AM)

    nice one, , like it
    keep it up, , , , , , , , , voted 10++++
    thx 4 charring
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  • (9/28/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    this was real reminded me of my childhood game of rhyming words and keep talking to myself in the process while I played alone with my toys...
    a trick to occupy myself
    a useful trick taught by my late grandfather
    a person who encouraged my to keep writing my mind out
    a person who indeed valued my funny thoughts
    and kept telling others, I was capable to doing good...
    with regards
    keep up he good work dear..
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  • (9/28/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    I like this one.............
    Very well written.
    This tied my tongue in 20 million knots.

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  • (9/28/2009 8:04:00 AM)

    full of onomatopoea...enjoyed having my tongue sshing about! (Report) Reply

  • (9/28/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    i'd wish to kissh that swishy fish,
    but fear that if i did,
    that i would get just slime 'n smelly
    on my cold wet lipsh!

    sooo cute and very Suessian! ! just wonderful for a childrens poetry book!
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