To Be Poem by Keilani Poetry

To Be

Rating: 5.0


Lately
when the winds sing
they remind me
of who I am

that the lines we draw
straight or curved
in the end
all converge

the twine that cobbles
our lofty sails
skillfully we bind
‘gainst whistling gales

after sundry batterings
at high sea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2022

Wonderful.... so beautifully penned. Top score.

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Anjandev Roy 25 December 2022

Simply marvelous.......thanks for sharing.....

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Bharati Nayak 25 December 2022

that the lines we draw straight or curved in the end all converge----Beautiful poem!

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Keilani Poetry 25 December 2022

I appreciate your kind words. Many thanks

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

I especially like…when the winds sing they remind me of who I am!

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Rob Lamberton 28 December 2022

Thank you again for surprising us with the gifts of Poetry here on Poem Hunter!

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Keilani Poetry 20 December 2022

Ah yes, dear poet, you know that if we listen, the winds may tell us surprising things!

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Sandra Feldman 17 December 2022

Truly beautifully executed!

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Sandra Feldman 17 December 2022

Poems come and poems go, But those extraordinary, With time, inly grow

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Keilani Poetry 20 December 2022

Thank you for your beautiful words.

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