Etching an amorous graffiti
On the blank walls of my mind
Where ever I am, I feel a pair of eyes
Fondly surveying and scanning me,
Speaking to me in silence
And keeps me awake in the night........much impressive lines those I love most. A marvelous poem is amazingly shared. Full vote sure.
This is an adroitly indited epitome of connoisseur-grade poetic eclat...all so tastefully laced with fine sumptuous twists of wit and of an eidetic passionate yearning unrivalled in the long variegated chronicles of LOVE. Well, I'm exceedingly glad to find your nectarous pen faithfully on paper still, my seasoned Prof: -) Kudos!
Sitting in my dimly lighted room/I draft this message of love/Pouring all my warmth into it/Thus emptying my love laden heart......endearing imagination....captivating poetic expression! A sweet poem loaded with fabulous contemplation of love! I love to read this fascinating piece of work again and again dear madam! (Poetess Magadha)
All words in the poem lines, mesmerizing and cocerning love, all words so well captured in a loveliest way.
An amazing poem about LOVE. Thank you for sharing this timeless Valentine poem, Valsa. A 10 Topscore and much much more.
It's a great romantic poem for all weather and all seasons! I sincerely appreciate and andmire your great thinking faculty! Scintillating imagination! Fascinating expression! My great pleasure reading this endearing piece of poetry time and again dear madam! Stay always happy, health and blessed!
I feel glad to have read this old poem almost accidentally,
and wonder how many such gems lie buried in unknown depths of PH.
Brilliant imagery full of sentiments and passion.
I don't maintain a My Poems list, or else it would go there.
And upon each encounter of my magical sleep,
I continue from the last dream that your lips touched my mouth...
Valsa George... Unravel this majestic mystery to me
that I may do so understand why I repeat
in reading this piece as I do a really good song.
I think I rely on this piece giving me peace in my sleep.
Please keep up the good work and keep us simple poets sustained in your work.
Sitting in my dimly lighted room/I draft this message of love/Pouring all my warmth into it/Thus emptying my love laden heart.....endearing expression! This lovely piece of poetry is one among my favorite poems! I derive great pleasure reading this wonderful work love poem time and again!