Friday, January 3, 2003

To The Holy Spirit Comments

Rating: 2.9
Immeasurable haze:
The desert valley spreads
Up golden river-beds
As if in other days.

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COMMENTS
Brian Jani 12 July 2014
this poem is skilfully penned.i like how versatile you are when it comes to word use.
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Nick Capozzoli 18 April 2009
Readers may be turned off by the diction...the 'thou' and 'thee...' but what is said is quite fine.
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