Tanya Ivanova

Freshman - 630 Points (04.08.1980 / Varna, Bulgaria)

Tonight - Poem by Tanya Ivanova

Tonight again is running slow,
Like many nights in even row,
But I got feeling that this night,
Not everything will be all right.

Cause when the prejudice will break,
Insanity will be awake,
Illusions it is gonna sell,
And it will open doors of hell.

And you will come like a surprise,
And all my passion’s gonna rise.
And if I am so puzzling brave,
You will be not at all in safe.

And all these flames in your look,
My eyes for you are open book.
And if your love is so d*mn real,
There’s something here for real deal.

Topic(s) of this poem: Love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Love Story

Comments about Tonight by Tanya Ivanova

  • Anil Kumar Panda (4/15/2014 12:06:00 PM)

    this is a very nice poem with nice flow.liked it. (Report) Reply

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  • Mallika Achuthan Menon (4/14/2014 10:58:00 AM)

    Great poem...I enjoyed it a lot.. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (4/12/2014 11:33:00 PM)

    Full of feeling and pregnant with passion. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (4/12/2014 10:03:00 AM)

    This is a very alluring poem, much unlike your poem 'Men Do Not Know How To Love'. The second last stanza is very nice, except the spelling mistakes of 'rise' and 'safe'. The last line of the poem leaves much for imagination.
    On a similar note, I have a poem titled 'He Will Come Home Tonight'. If possible, please read, rate and comment on my poem.
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  • (4/10/2014 11:54:00 PM)

    I will be glad to do it, tomorrow, just saw this and it is too late., now, very tired. Excuse me (Report) Reply

  • Tanya Ivanova (4/10/2014 10:44:00 PM)

    Thank you. If I have some mistakes with the prepositions I would be glad to be corrected. (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2014 6:52:00 PM)

    Very enticing, alluring in a poetic way. Your handling of the English language is quite good and amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu (4/9/2014 5:36:00 AM)

    A great poem full of emotion(s) . Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 8, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 12, 2014

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