Aqua Flower (The Princess is)

Too - Poem by Aqua Flower (The Princess is)

I wake up
to another day
lists and tasks
all pilled up in my way
all that needs to be done
quick, hurry, grab your coffee, run
for precious time is ticking
there is no time for ice cream licking
do! do! do!
for you, you, you!
but then I stop and think, why only you?
I have needs too!

Topic(s) of this poem: disappointment, frustration

Comments about Too by Aqua Flower (The Princess is)

  • Susan Williams (1/3/2017 2:51:00 PM)

    Love the way the rhythm of this piece is so staccato that underlines the hurry, hurry, hurry things to do tone of this- -that is showing great poetic skills! ! ! 10 (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower Aqua Flower (1/5/2017 5:07:00 AM)

    Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliment! Greatly appreciated! Glad you like the poem!

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  • Ramona Gerry (1/2/2017 8:22:00 AM)

    I have needs too! Nicely said! (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower Aqua Flower (1/2/2017 5:59:00 PM)

    Thank you for your comment on my poem! :)

  • Aqua Flower (1/2/2017 8:18:00 AM)

    Tired and retired.
    You need a ninja shake and to read my poem mix it up again... :) ..But i understand my friend...Feel better! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Barry Middleton (1/2/2017 7:18:00 AM)

    I used to feel this way but now I am retired. Tired but also retired. Well expressed. (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower Aqua Flower (1/5/2017 5:08:00 AM)

    thank you for sympathizing.......I want to retire! wah! wah!

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 2, 2017

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 24, 2017

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