Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 206,566 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Tornado (Haiku) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Rotating column
Connecting the sky and ground
Nature’s dark beauty

Topic(s) of this poem: life, nature, tornado

Form: Haiku

Comments about Tornado (Haiku) by Kelly Kurt

  • (4/24/2018 9:27:00 PM)

    I think it's a good haiku and you should try to make more haikus that are directly to the point (Report) Reply

    (4/24/2018 10:52:00 PM)

    Thank you for choosing to pick from my poems. I will reciprocate.

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  • Bri Edwards (2/20/2016 1:51:00 PM)

    well, i don't know if i'd call it beauty, but certainly fascinating. :)
    a tornado ii mean.

    nice one
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    Kelly Kurt (2/20/2016 3:59:00 PM)

    If you have ever seen a time lapse of a super-cell spawning a tornado, I think you'd know the beauty of which I speak

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/5/2015 9:53:00 AM)

    Nature creates amazing beauty connecting Earth and sky. This is definitely very fantastic poem that guides humanity basing on nature's thrill. Interesting.10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (12/5/2015 12:07:00 PM)

    Beauty can be frightening

  • Souren Mondal (12/4/2015 9:58:00 PM)

    I wonder if this could be seen as a 'turbulent' relationship between heaven and earth by my religious brethen? ?

    As Asim said, sometimes our minds are like this, very, very turbulent... Thanks for sharing Kelly.. Like all your poems, this one too, is highly open to interpretations...
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    Kelly Kurt (12/5/2015 12:55:00 AM)

    Sometimes the interpretation is left open on purpose, sometimes it's just a happy coincidence. And I'm sure there are those who would put such significance on the natural phenomenon.

  • Kim Barney (12/4/2015 3:43:00 PM)

    Great Haiku. So many people think they are writing haikus when they are not. They miscount the syllables, but you never do.
    Well done, as usual.
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    Kelly Kurt (12/4/2015 5:17:00 PM)

    Thanks, Kim. I have miscounted at least once and have mislabeled Senryu as haiku but I am getting better

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/4/2015 2:04:00 PM)

    Nicely described...A tornado in world and a tornado in mind....Thx Mr. Kelly. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (12/4/2015 5:19:00 PM)

    I have lived in 'tornado alley' my entire life and have not seen one in person. It is something I would like to experience first-hand before I die

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2015

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