Thursday, June 8, 2006

Torture Me No More Comments

Rating: 2.0

Near my longing heart she lives,
I can't be safe ere love she gives,
When I want to be closely near her,
When I advance in both her love and care,


Omar Osman Jabak
Chinedu Dike 28 May 2021

Well expressed thoughts and feelings in verse with rhythmic splendour. Very heartfelt with strong emotions.

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Blue Eyes 16 August 2008

it hurts the most when the one u love wrongs u. i cannot imagine a better way to say that than the way u did. about the idea that love does not hurt people but lovers do, well, i don`t think we agree on this cuz when most of lovers hurt each other by betraial or any kind of harm, then love is responsible for it. when u punch a guy with ur hand, can u say its not my fault its my hand`s? actions have cosequences and the outcome of love is hurt.''tareq''

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John Tiong Chunghoo 08 June 2006

it should never be the person we do not like. it should always be his or her action. everyman has his weak point. zoom in on the acts. that's what love is. to prove yourself to the one you love.

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JJ Rocks 08 June 2006

Your words speak the truth. Beautifully written.

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