Thursday, June 3, 2010

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You define me
your full body
your white skin
your lovely dimples


arnab gupta
Manoj Jha 16 June 2010
Delicious, Pictorial and more than this, legible. Since it is very short poem it always looks good. What it lacks, the more subtle word and narrow lines and curved flow. Suppose one can compare hot tawa to the morning sun, and breads are dancing on tawa. So your portrayal of the Pizza can be more interesting and tasty. Anyhow your theme is good, but needs some more spice in portrayal.
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