Tuesday, July 6, 2021

Touchstone Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a dilemma
I touched a touchstone and it melted therein; sailing love and tears away.

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Quaid-Uz- Zaman
COMMENTS
Robert Murray Smith 23 September 2021

Words melt before our eyes.

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M Asim Nehal 07 July 2021

Awesome, magic of touchstone. Terse.5*****

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 July 2021

Quite poignant thought… brevity makes the poem wonderful

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Lasaad Tayeb 06 July 2021

Wonderful Monoku, great imagery

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Wonderful poem in just minimal lines. Thought provoking.

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