Allen Steble

Rookie - 110 Points (20/04/1987)

Traffic - Poem by Allen Steble

It's eight o'clock
time to wake up
get ready for work
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Comments about Traffic by Allen Steble

  • Wahab Abdul (5/19/2013 10:02:00 PM)

    well said and well crafted poem on daily life with a tinge of fun, like it.. (Report) Reply

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/17/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    You write very lovely poem plz read and rate my poems (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2013 10:13:00 AM)

    Is the traffic so bad in Perth? (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2013 3:51:00 AM)

    I like the simplicity of your write (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2013 3:19:00 AM)

    Interesting and thought-provoking poem. It gives the reader that feeling of routine daily working life caught up in Traffic. The repetition of the second stanza...Bumper to bumper/ underscores the routine. Good flow and imagery. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Barb Mcavaney (5/17/2013 3:13:00 AM)

    a busy time in traffic (Report) Reply

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