Diane Hine

Silver Star - 4,143 Points (25 July 1956)

Triolet: Sacrifice - Poem by Diane Hine

Mosquito you must die for me,
with one last hypodermic bite.
You have my blood and guarantee,
mosquito you must die for me.
I line you up and count to three,
goodNIGHT! to you, to me goodnight.

Mosquito you must die for me,
With one last hypodermic bite.

Comments about Triolet: Sacrifice by Diane Hine

  • Johnathan Juarez (5/16/2012 10:40:00 AM)

    your rhythms are easier said than done. there so relaxed and subtly complex. at least they seem that way to me (Report) Reply

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  • (4/19/2012 11:32:00 PM)

    One proboscis' hypodermic prick 
    Can foil an alfresco dining trip,
    Provide in a welt an uncalled for 
    Post performance of an improv impromptu slapping dance.
    The risk of truce there is no chance.

    Top poem. 
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  • Hans Vr (4/19/2012 9:09:00 PM)

    Good poem Diane. Touching emotion and wisdom on a lighter note. Well done (Report) Reply

  • (4/15/2012 2:26:00 PM)

    Funny isnt it how much the little beasts look like syringes (with wings as plungers maybe?) Funny too how
    a virus has a much similar look and if anything looks much more like an injection apparatus! I love that line,
    'you have my blood and guarantee' lol..
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  • Valerie Dohren (4/13/2012 1:37:00 PM)

    Am reviewing this whilst you are fast asleep Diane - hope he doesn't get you. Good little poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 12, 2012

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