Aastha Uppal

Rookie - 29 Points (7th march 1990)

Truth Of Life - Poem by Aastha Uppal

As the wind blows
My silent heart glows
The feeling of enthusiasm uproars.
When the first rays if the sun fall
My inner voice softly calls;
'This is the time to do the best,
After that you leave the rest'.

Then rises a new hope
A new challenge, a new scope
To climb the success slope
With a perseverance rope.

Sudden dark clouds of grievances formulate
The pessimistic side turns awake
Thoughts of failure suddenly occur
And i see myself greatly suffer.

Remember the one who made you descend
He did some good and rest you do
But don't you quit
As this is the time to do the best
After that you leave the rest.

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Comments about Truth Of Life by Aastha Uppal

  • Wahab Abdul (3/8/2012 10:36:00 AM)


    THE POEM CALM MY MIND AND GIVES A PLEASURE TO MY SOUL………………………………….

    THIS IS REALLY GREAT, YOU R TOO MUCH TALENTED, THE WAY YOU PENNED THE POEM IS REALLY PRAISE WORTHY, WELL WORDED, A WELL CRAFTED POEM INDEED, I LIKE THE POEM AS YOU LIKE IT. PLEASE READ MY POEM, I WANT TO DIE’’
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  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (2/7/2012 9:23:00 AM)


    i like the positive outlook
    it is helpful when you want to rebound from a failure or a broken heart
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  • Aranthabailu Ummar (10/5/2011 11:41:00 AM)


    waking of with good hope, it changing suddenly by a scream (Report) Reply

  • (5/9/2011 8:01:00 AM)


    Wow..Each and every line in thisw poem is great.. :)
    Thanks for sharing...
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  • (11/8/2010 8:42:00 AM)


    really mesmerising..loved it..keep writing more.. (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2010 9:06:00 AM)


    awesome...quite a meaningful poem with well written way..liked it much (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2010 5:32:00 AM)


    Really really a very beautifull poem...... I can say wow........ Really best one and real value to life....... (Report) Reply

  • Gita Ashok (7/11/2010 1:04:00 AM)


    Best lines:

    Remember the one who made you descend
    He did some good and rest you do
    But don't you quit
    As this is the time to do the best
    After that you leave the rest.

    Such a beautiful poem filled with positivity, metaphor, imagery and a profound message written in a clear and crisp style. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
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  • (7/10/2010 12:42:00 PM)


    This poem speaks of being an overcomer, against all odds. An uplifting write, ending in the positive! Enjoyed; D (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2010 2:32:00 PM)


    ‘Then rises a new hope
    A new challenge, a new scope
    To climb the success slope
    With a perseverance rope.’ ~ Packed optimism…’Charaivati’ ~ Veda… [March forward and forward]…metaphor magnificent… thanks for sharing …
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • (7/5/2010 11:45:00 AM)


    You have beautifully described the truth of life.Well done.and you your self never say no to challenges.keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Kumud Ranjan (4/23/2010 1:21:00 PM)


    this is a brilliant piece of work i have gone thru'..in merely 4 stanza you showed us the optimistic scenario so u portrayed of dark..
    n thn finally a heartfelt message..very well indeed...
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  • (4/23/2010 12:55:00 PM)


    TRUE FLOW IN TRUTH OF LIFE
    KEEP IT UP
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  • (2/27/2010 1:22:00 AM)


    well-written poem....
    nicely penned.
    thank you.
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  • premji premji (2/10/2010 4:04:00 AM)


    good write............................... (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/23/2010 1:04:00 PM)


    Pregnant with positivity! Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/24/2009 11:21:00 AM)


    A very optimistic approach to face truth of life, nicely described. Good work, Aastha, keep the hope alive. Best Wishes.

    Naseer
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  • (12/24/2009 12:10:00 AM)


    A good approach of life...One should always do his best in life despite all the passing by clouds... (Report) Reply

  • The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (12/21/2009 9:41:00 AM)


    A good poems...appreciable work of the poetess... :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 1:29:00 PM)


    we, you will never fully understand life good try....
    well express
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 8, 2016


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