kanav justa

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Turning Away - Poem by kanav justa

I went into an elite bar
And asked for precious wine
I tipped few dollars to thomas
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Comments about Turning Away by kanav justa

  • Queeny Gona (11/18/2013 9:07:00 AM)

    Touched my heart! So true and the scene moved just infront of my eyes! The day I denied a penny to a female beggar last year hurt me so much even to date. I woe her my sincere apologies! (Report) Reply

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  • Kavya . (11/11/2013 1:48:00 AM)

    a good one.......its nice to help the needy but there are some who do no efforts inspite of being fit physically and try to earn fast money! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (11/10/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    a true reflection of today's society. lending a helping hand is a good thing (Report) Reply

  • (11/9/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    So true and dipped in reality! Loved. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (11/6/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    Excellent write. While we all sit in our luxurious homes gorgeing ourselves we really should be taking thought to those with nothing, all over the world. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (11/5/2013 2:00:00 PM)

    A lesson for us all to take heed. Good one Kanav. (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/3/2013 8:22:00 AM)

    Charity is the worship as I think well writ poem thank you (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (11/3/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    A mirror held up to society to reflect our selfishness and self importance as we become deaf, dumb and blind to peoples needs, as we walk on by losing our souls along the mean streets of life!
    Inspired and excellent write!
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  • Matt Mooney (11/2/2013 8:56:00 AM)

    Suffering humanity-if only we could be more helpful and give them a kind word or a smile as well. Good poem on this theme. (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    So true..! ! Nice 1.. It reveals the fact of our society.. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/1/2013 11:25:00 PM)

    This is a truthful depiction of our callous attitude to life and its suffering! We are becoming so sightless! The last stanza is really beautiful! ! (Report) Reply



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