Saturday, July 27, 2013

Twin Triplets.No.14. Birth N' Death, Deadly Love Comments

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If waking is a mini birth
And sleeping, a minor death


Valsa George
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2018
If waking is a mini birth And sleeping, a minor death Aren’t we born and dead everyday? ...... yes, we are. everyday it is happening. Oh! How thousands immolate true love it happen. Both Triplets are well penned. Beautiful poems shared amazingly.
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Akhtar Jawad 18 April 2018
Every new breath is death of the last breath. Thoughtful!
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2016
Life and death! Walking along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Heather Wilkins 10 August 2013
a good write on birth and death
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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 July 2013
I am with you, Valsa in your 1st triplet as in the same vein I had composed a poem! As for your 2nd one the deadly love is well spelled!
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Ramesh Rai 29 July 2013
life is action action is life
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Patricia Grantham 28 July 2013
Twin short and inspiring writes. Love like coal can grow hot and burn then turn to ashes when cold then grows old! Nice write.
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Danny Draper 28 July 2013
Succinct and powerful coupling, the first evocative the latter provocative.
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Contrasting triplets. We are also dead when we see injustice and are helpless to act. Thank you.
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simple, meaningful and beautiful thanks for sharing
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