Sunday, May 19, 2013

Ugly Legs Of Peacock Comments

Rating: 4.8

Once, I danced;
Under the cloudless canopy,
With a dream of yours,
What a joyous moment it was!

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Aftab Alam
COMMENTS
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 January 2016

Lovely flow of words indeed....

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Darlene Walsh 16 January 2015

Unrequited love, especially when you work so hard to be loved, can cause great pain and sadness.

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Partha Shaha 24 September 2014

very nice

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Chinedu Dike 23 September 2014

Very catchy title. What a disappointment in the bliss of love! A lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 03 September 2014

Love must hurt. Otherwise it isn't love. Ma sha Allah... Loved the images created..

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Pardaz Aftab 05 November 2013

A great imagination...

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Ramesh Rai 22 October 2013

very natural n excellent write

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Arif Khan 19 September 2013

EXCELLENT, wonderful poem of love, hope, joy & disappointment

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Ruby Mostazir 17 September 2013

ah i catch you here on contest love to vote on your poem.........Excellent!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 September 2013

It is my humble request to all PH's honorable members to read and comment and Vote THANK YOU

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Inwalked Bud 29 August 2013

This is a very wonderful poem of love, hope, joy & disappointment..It brought me to the moment as though I were there watching...I enjoyed this very much!

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Kanav Justa 20 May 2013

a great imagination, , , , nice write, , ,

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Ruby Mostazir 19 May 2013

Congrats! you made century wid a nice 1.

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Ruby Mostazir 19 May 2013

beautiful broken heart poem, i love dis.: -)

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Diane Hine 19 May 2013

If he didn't have those fine functional legs, he'd be sitting in the mud. It must have been a beautiful dance!

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Wahab Abdul 19 May 2013

good poem in good diction...a poem of disappointment....love this too

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Neela Nath Das 19 May 2013

Really disappointment has no beauty which it can sow in our mind.Beautiful...

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