Zach Stahle

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Unacceptable - Poem by Zach Stahle

When I first moved in
she was just a little girl
But now...
I can't keep her out of my head
She's so beautiful now
I'm so afraid...
She's only 13
...I'm 15
So we'll stay friends
I know she feels the same longing
the same ache
because she looks at me so lovingly
I can't keep my eyes off of her
I think I'm falling
it's gonna hurt
I know it
It already hurts
We're just friends
We walked through the field across the street...
our fingers almost touched
If she would just ask me...
I'd say yes

Comments about Unacceptable by Zach Stahle

  • (10/5/2009 7:52:00 PM)

    Aw. Thats cute. Why not ask her? Take a chance. Anyway, great poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/18/2009 12:32:00 AM)

    Love touching across the ages
    One soft spoken word can disrupt the peace
    When ones heart isn't in the same age
    The only thing you can do is wait
    And hope the love can survive the time

    This is a real love touching across the time, tell me more please
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  • (8/27/2008 9:13:00 PM)

    This gets a nine because of the presentation of its content. This had to be gentlyu done and it was, Good job.

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  • (7/20/2008 9:30:00 PM)

    Hi there,

    I must admit, this is a very touching write, and I wish you all the best,

    Amie-Lee :) :) :) :)
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  • (6/26/2008 7:27:00 PM)

    a touching write.
    ure really good.
    keep it up.
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  • (6/26/2008 12:10:00 PM)

    Is your age true on the PH Site? .........

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 26, 2008

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