Monday, October 15, 2018

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When people begin to perceive,
Anyone who takes interest...
In the doing of their deeds.
Is jealous and envious.


Lawrence S. Pertillar
Bri Edwards 16 October 2018
line 3: why the period? and after some other lines as well? They only thing, .. i think you 'want' The, not They. i would read it more easily and appreciate the poem more if you cleaned it up a bit. bri :)
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