Wednesday, August 16, 2017

Under The Avenue Tree Comments

Rating: 4.9
Wow! Who planted these rows of tree and all...
I haven't seen but he seems to be known.
The trees, as if, all friends, praise him in rustle
Day and night by the winds sweet blown.

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Pallab Chaudhury
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Rows of trees standing together like friends is a pleasure, not just to watch but to recline in its cool shade..The lovely trees beckon and talk to to the cow boy grazing his cows. He just does not feel like going back home, though he must to return the cows back to the shed. A poem with splendid imagery and feel for nature......Beautiful poem Pallab! Enjoyed reading. A full score....10
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Pallab Chaudhury 10 August 2020
Thank you for the beautiful comments and kind words... Stay safe.
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Vaibhav Simha 07 June 2020
This a great piece! The opening is similar to how Robert Frost begins his " Walking by the Woods on a Snowy Evening" . Is there the influence of that poem on this? I could be mistaken. I ask the poet to clarify this. The nature-centric approach is fabulous!
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Pallab Chaudhury 12 June 2020
Comment: Yes, Vaibhav! The said poem influenced me a lot... This is the translated work of my original poem written in Bengali. Thank you. Stay safe pc
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Magadha Rani 28 January 2020
The cows have gone away; some are in game; And by the day-end I need to go all along! The lovely trees are calling me by name; Being a cow-boy, how can I sit for long? Wonderful expression! A beautiful poem...10++
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Pallab Chaudhury 01 February 2020
Thank you for reading the poem.. Stay blessed... pc
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Jaya Agarwal 09 September 2019
A very good poem.....nicely written- - -X
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Pallab Chaudhury 09 September 2019
Thank you so much for sharing your views regarding the poem. Stay blessed... pc
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A B Faniki 01 September 2019
Nice simply nice and lovely. Thanks for sharing
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Pallab Chaudhury 09 September 2019
Thank you so much for the positive comment being forwarded... With best wishes pc
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Prabir Gayen 23 March 2019
The cows have gone away; some are in game; And by the day-end I need to go all along! The lovely trees are calling me by name; Being a cow-boy, how can I sit for long? I have to return the cows to their shed, Before the sun becomes just setting-red... ......a beautiful divine cow- boy....fine poem dear poet thanks 10000000++++++
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Pallab Chaudhury 23 March 2019
happy to see you in my e-page. Thanking you a lot for the comment being forwarded. Stay blessed my dear... pc
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Bharati Nayak 10 October 2018
Wow! Who planted these rows of tree and all... I haven't seen but he seems to be known. The trees, as if, all friends, praise him in rustle Day and night by the winds sweet blown. - - - - - - - - - wow- - such a lovely poem on nature ! Who has planted the rows of trees ? Your heart is grateful for the unknown gardener who cared to plant trees for travellers .Heart is grateful for the Almighty for He is the gardener who cares for His creatures.
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Pallab Chaudhury 11 October 2018
Nice to have your comments and feelings... Thank you for your kind visit. With best wishes PC
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Israj Ali 08 October 2018
The cows have gone away; some are in game; And by the day-end I need to go all along! Nice composition
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Pallab Chaudhury 08 October 2018
Thank you for the very positive feedback. With best wishes PC
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Akhtar Jawad 05 April 2018
Pallab Ji, its an amazing poem, loved its beauty, how beautiful would be the original Bangali poem!
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Pallab Chaudhury 07 April 2018
Thank for your kind visit to the e-page and particularly for your encouraging comments. With best wishes.
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Rini Shibu 15 February 2018
wonderful nature poem, nice imagery..10
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Pallab Chaudhury 15 February 2018
Thanks a lot for your comments. With best wishes.
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Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2017
The second stanza is very good. Trees are our natural care taker.
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Pallab Chaudhury 20 October 2017
Nice to receive a comment from you. With thanks. All the best.
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Sarah Persson 03 October 2017
Nature is wonderful and the trees are just a small part of it. This is a beautifully written poem. Being a cow-boy, how can I sit for long? I've to return the cow to the shed, Before the sun is just setting-red Brilliant, Well earned 10
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Pallab Chaudhury 05 October 2017
Encouraged by your words... Thank you very much.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2017
Though we don't know who has planted the avenue trees still these trees are very helpful to us. They provide shadow to way farers and fruits to eat. The shepherds take rest under the trees and save their bodies from hot sunshine. 'Trees our friends', dear Pallab, this statement is right. You have nicely inscribed the trees as alive and talking creature.. ..let it be quoted.. The lovely trees are calling me by name; Being a cow-boy, how can I sit for long? I've to return the cow to the shed, Before the sun is just setting-red. It is a beautiful poem on trees and nature having nice depiction. Many thanks dear Pallab, keep the ball rolling.
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Pallab Chaudhury 06 September 2017
Very happy to see your inspiring comments! With best wishes and regards.
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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2017
I like this work, i feel like this is a view from a person that look his life, and start to ponder everything because nature always make us wonder...at the same time feel free and happy...This is what i can imagine when i read this. It is a joy to read this, keep it up
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Pallab Chaudhury 16 August 2017
Thank you for your appreciation and encouragement. With regards.
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Chinedu Dike 16 August 2017
Good work, very realistic description. Thanks for sharing Pallab.
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Pallab Chaudhury 16 August 2017
Thank you for your appreciation. With best wishes.
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Rajnish Manga 16 August 2017
Very sweet poem. It shows your great love of nature. I have read many poems about trees and dusk but this one is unique in its expression. Thanks and a warm welcome on this Forum.
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Pallab Chaudhury 16 August 2017
Happy to see your comment. Thank you. With best wishes and regards.
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 August 2017
A great start with a nice poem, Pallab. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
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Pallab Chaudhury 16 August 2017
Thank you very much for your encouraging words.
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