Unknown Lover Poem by Rohan Roy

Unknown Lover

Rating: 4.5


I'm always with you, even when you're far away
Your love fills my heart every single day

I'm always thinking about you day and night
Your smile to me is the most pleasant sight

I never forget you for a moment
And if i do, may my life end

I miss you even when your by my side
I miss you with every flowing tide

I want you always before my eyes
In the core of my heart your name lies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.ram Mehta 08 November 2010

Nice feelings of love and its yearnings, RohaN

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Lynn Glover 09 November 2010

A beautiful poem with great flow and natural rhythem and rhyme. I enjoyed the read, keep up the excellent work.

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Samantha Garnett 09 November 2010

i really like this one. you really put emotion in it.

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Mason Riddle 09 November 2010

i really like this poem, it sounds like something ive been trying to write for my girlfriend for a long time, anyways good work

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Suja Nair 03 December 2010

yes, I am always with you even when you are far away..... that is true love....great work..

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Stormy Day 19 November 2010

Ever thought of going pro critic Roberto?

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Stormy Day 18 November 2010

Oh, so imbued with longing. How one heart bears so much is the greatest mystery.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 13 November 2010

Well done. Run long with your unknown lover through the mist and dusk. Try to be light somewhere at its end.10/10 Regards, pranab

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Marieta Maglas 11 November 2010

''In the core of my heart your name lies''- wonderful lyric poem...you can express your feelings very well

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