Thursday, July 16, 2009

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Rating: 5.0
I sing again and again
The same song of rain
That stuck in my brain
It left my heart with stain

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Kranthi Pothineni
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rago rago 20 July 2009
beautiful write.......... finely expressed abut unknown....
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Surya . 18 July 2009
nice theme in rhymes. voted10 surya
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Louis Rams 17 July 2009
very much in rhyme by word. rain, brain, stain
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 July 2009
Rhymes and rhymes and rhymes.............. nice to read.
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Eyan Desir 17 July 2009
Goood write.....and nice rhymes......
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lovely rhymes kranthi........
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Antonio Liao 17 July 2009
wonderful poem...a caution to everyone....a poem of love...let this poem be read to those who leave no mercy and love in their heart, body and soul... nice to be posted in every corner of any public place....serve as a warning poem.....a true poem of life...God bless.... God bless...10 +++
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Catrina Heart 16 July 2009
Fantastic rhyming scheme each line were all same yet sometimes same rhyme scheme makes the poem dull. Why not try abab rhyme scheme now sure it will make a difference in your poetic pattern into excellence. THanks! !
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Ted M 16 July 2009
You are an expert at rhyme. Singing the same song of rain, stuck in the brain; Looks like you miss something or may be that someone. Season my dear friend; brings back many memories. I'm hoping some of your rhyme may rub on me.
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Saadat Tahir 16 July 2009
well rhymed and thought out poem... the song of life...thats it....will only end with the dat of doom...we are just so much clown...doing our part...and curtains... your anguish shines through and......deeper is the impact.....then is immediately apparent from the poem itself.. written by a sensitized sensitive heart.....more in a msg cheers
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Joseph Poewhit 16 July 2009
Sort of like boxing with shadows.
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premji premji 16 July 2009
what a rhyming.......congrats.........
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Marieta Maglas 16 July 2009
nice lyric poem, well penned with ideas, nice rhymes..10
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