Wednesday, February 6, 2008

Vastness Comments

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Vastness

Where am I in this world?
Do I take an important place?

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Luke Holland
COMMENTS
Pete Bazz 09 January 2019
Great job! I agree, it's really important to think about the big picture and try not to sweat the small stuff, such as a rhyme scheme... You are obviously going through some changes and questioning the meaning of life and where you fit in to this world as you grow in to a young man.I just want to let you know that you will get through this Luke, try not to worry if you haven't got hairs yet, everyone grows at their own pace. I know Lin and Bob would be proud. Go get 'em tiger x
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Mary Gordley 07 February 2008
Luke, it is so exciting when young people so such promise. Promise you will keep on asking the important questions as you go through life and please do keep on writing. I look forward to reading more.
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David Taylor 06 February 2008
Great Questions Luke, don't be too hasty to think you have the answers David.....And philosophers say the greatest question is 'Who Am I'
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